Sunday, October 20, 2013

Toulmin Analysis on Appyling Ethos Blog


In one of my previous blogs I expanded upon the idea of CGS families receiving background checks; which is my claim. The reason I chose this social change project is because I feel like the students we’re hosting should have a sense of security and comfort coming into our homes. I did mention a qualifier in my last blog and it’s that the background checks are limited to the families that decide to host a student from another country. It would be unnecessary and an invasion of privacy if every family received a background check; not every student in CGS is going to host a student.

            In my blog my warrants are explicit statements, and it’s that students should and want to be safe when entering a new person’s home for the first time. There parent’s should also feel like their child is entering a safe environment. I did include a backing, which is very logical, however, I think it was lacking in evidence. My backing is that many homes do not have enough room to house another student or sometimes family members could be verbally, physically, mentally, and emotionally abusive. I lacked in evidence when I stated this because I never heard of a student being hosted complaining about any such thing. I think I should’ve added a qualifier in my evidence stating that it’s just a precaution, and that such incidents haven’t occurred that we know about.
            One thing I didn’t include in my previous blog is the conditions of rebuttal. If I were to include this, the conditions of rebuttal would be that some people feel like there is not a need for the background checks because they cost extra money and time, and that the families and homes of CGS students are great to host a student. That’s a nice thing to believe about the families of CGS, but we are never entirely sure because this is reality. Safety and comfort for the students we’re hosting should be our top priority; it shouldn’t be downplayed because it costs CGS extra time and money. If CGS is about expanding our ideas of the world, then it should be done safely.

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