My Rhetorical Analysis Outline
on
Chaim Weizmann’s Speech
Purpose: To
enforce power and show that he’s here for the Jewish people in the process of
reclaiming Jerusalem
Audience:
The Jewish Zionist; Palestinian Muslims and Arabs; the UN
Context: First
he was appointed of the Zionist Commission in 1918 by the British. He then
became the president of the World Zionist Organization until 1946. Eventually
he became the first president of Israel in February of 1949 with the help of
having friends in high places in America and Britain. However, in 1948
Jerusalem was under the control of the UN.
Claims: Jerusalem
rightfully belongs to the Jewish; the Jewish should come together in helping to
take their land back
Warrants: The
Jewish fought and protected Jerusalem in the past; it was their land before the
Palestinian Arabs came along (faulty warrants weakens argument a lot)
Appeals: Pathos-creating
a sense that a part of Palestine, specifically Jerusalem, belongs to the Jewish
people; creating a sense of patriotism for their old land
Technique:
·
Use of rhetorical questions. The purpose
and use for this is to show that he has knowledge of what’s happening in
Palestine at the time. To show that he knows the struggle the Jewish people are
going through. To explain that no one has their back, except him and he’s going
to get Israel recognized as a country. “Did they lift a finger…for months on
end?”
·
Diction: “quintessence”: That Jerusalem
is everything to the Jewish people. “…lodestar in all our wanderings”: Guiding
light in life; showed them the way. “…eternal mother…”: Jerusalem is nurturing
to them, taken care of them, taught the Jewish people their morals, where they emerged.
“…with your blood and your sacrifice”: very pathos filled, make people want
rally together to reclaim Jerusalem, makes people want to trust him because he
knows the people’s hardships
·
Metaphors: “Jerusalem is the eternal
mother of the Jewish people…”
Jargon: “…far-flung Diaspora…”=Jews that are spread
out and not living in Israel
Tone: In the beginning very
sorrowful and mournful about the lost, gradually becomes more accusing, nostalgic,
and angry towards the Arabs and the British for not supporting them the way
they wanted them to
General
Evaluation: Very weak argument because he had a
faulty warrants and very little to no evidence. The argument was full of pathos
very little to no logos at all. I wish he had more direct evidence; the argument
would’ve been more solid. Filled with a lot of rhetorical questions, could have
had a more of a variety of techniques to make the argument stronger. His argument
was only good at getting the emotions he wanted out of the audience he was
speaking to. One thing I do want to point out though is that this speech was
delivered in a different language. Some words could have been lost in
translation because some words or phrases don’t have a translation. Also the
translator could have bias causing the speaker to appear differently than originally
intended.
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